“What was that?” I asked.
As the day lengthened, evolved.
It was the universe.
Talking to me straightforward
Transition comes in phases.
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Flowers grow before bloom. Nice poem and message. Good job
Thank you!!! I take it seriously coming from you. My first try at Tanka. Nerve-wracking, lol. So appreciate your words.
Seems like you aced it. Hope the process was enjoyable too!
Oh it was. Always fun to try something new. 😊. And thank you so much!!
You’re welcome…and good! Here’s to more.
I just realized I need 2 more syllables for the last line. Time to edit, lol
I say leave it…make it your own. Be the lead and others will follow. 🙂