Haiku No. 412: Waiting for the Sun

Posted on February 10, 2018 by learning to live like water

morning coffee

Lazy foggy morn

Hot coffee and quiet words

Waiting for the sun.

By Deborah E. Dayen

Picture from Pinterest

6 responses to “Haiku No. 412: Waiting for the Sun”

thelonelyauthorblog says:

February 10, 2018 at 10:13 am

Nicely done

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- learning to live like water says:
  
  February 10, 2018 at 10:17 am
  
  Thanks so much!
  
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trE says:

February 10, 2018 at 11:46 am

The first line has six syllables. But, a lovely image you have created here with your words, Deb!

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- learning to live like water says:
  
  February 10, 2018 at 12:28 pm
  
  Omg. Thank you for that. I meant it to be as it is now, lol but apparently my fingers felt differently about it! Thank you trE!!!! For the correction and your kind words!
  
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  - trE says:
    
    February 10, 2018 at 12:29 pm
    
    Haha! You’re most welcome. it happens to us all. 🙂
    
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    - learning to live like water says:
      
      February 10, 2018 at 12:30 pm
      
      🌸😊
      
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