7 responses to “Haiku No. 3: Coconuts

  1. “Drumming me to sleep” is great imagery and sound. I can hear the thumping of the drumming sound. Another stellar haiku, Deb!

  2. I’d be worried they would fall through the roof. Unless you were under the bed. Although, I don’t have much experience with coconuts. Only the shredded stuff for cakes. Love the imagery.

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