Sweltering, I sit,
In a gauzy summer dress
Wishing it was off.
Feel the warm breeze blow
Against my naked body
Potent, but refrained.
Pictures fill my head
Dreams of future, days long gone.
Sultry summer heat.
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Love it
Thank you!
I spotted two overdone lines. Otherwise very hazy and summery, which we are lacking here where I am!
Thank you my editor….LOL. Really I appreciate it…..I fixed them….I was too hot….
it is good you take it this way, Happy to help and shame to spoil a talent…slow down lol.
I do try, to slow down. There are times when I have such a hard time doing that! I think it was the heat today, lol. I’ve always moved too fast though. I’m about to retire, maybe then…:)
Oh well plenty of time for that then lol. Keep writing!
I can’t seem to stop, lol.