Floating on currents
Rudderless, I cannot point.
I lack direction.
Flood tide brings me in.
The ebb takes me far away
Landfall is a dream.
I cannot remain
In this forlorn little boat.
Better that I swim.
Written by Deborah E. Dayen
Picture from Google Images
learningtolivelikewaterblog.com 
I appreciated that, there is a a lot in there. You carried off the metaphor throughout unwavering and unsinking. Seriously, a very good package.
Thanks so much. I really appreciate your approval. š
That sounds dodgy, it isn’t for me to approve or disapprove, but to appreciate some sincere and competent writing when I see it. But I’m glad you re happy. I did love the content though. and it is all our experiences that count..
I will rephrase. It makes me happy that you like it. Really happy. Especially because you tell me why, from a writers standpoint. I think you make me better at what I love to do. š
Well wow, that made my day. Ty…and keep doing it.