Hangs suspended above the water
Laying in the sand
He was there with me
for a moment
A moment of my life
And a moment of his.
We scoured the horizon
Looking for the next step.
It was water,
There were no stepping stones.
There was nowhere else to go.
There was no boat
There was no dolphin.
We were at the end.
We held on tight
Tight enough to scar our hands
Tight enough to sear our hearts.
But not tight enough
To withstand the moon
And the sun
And the tides.
One of us washed away.
Then the other.
Leaving lands end.
Alone, in waters beginning.
Float on the water.
Live like water.
Let it take you where you need to go.
Transform, become what you never dared to be.
Alone, where the land ends
And the water begins.
Primal force carrying you
When you thought it was the end
It was really just a new beginning.
By Deborah E. Dayen
Picture from Google Images
& you got your own title in. Very good.
Thank you! What a nice thing to say!
I mean it. 🙂
Beautiful, very melancholic mood, I like it. 🙂 🌹
Oh and i emailed ya a “novel” as a reply again i think, or maybe u read that already… sorry i am so confused right now! Lol
I read it, and am about to reply. I’m moving a little slow this morning.
I wrote another long email LOL but you do NOT have to hurry to read or answer hee hee just so you know. Just whenever you are bored or have spare time, I dont want it to be a stressful thing lol. Hugs!! 🌹
I have lots of time on my hand so I’m happy to have something good to read!
I understand 🙂 I was the same on my vacation lol.
I sent you back a novel, lol.
Likewise, ahahaha I am so nervous now that it is crazy… not good for my blood pressure!!! 😨😓💙
Breathe….! I’m just happy, happy not to be in a game. Not to be the crossbar holding up the triangle. You’ll be fine!!! 😊
Yesh I wrote an email again lol, nevermind that, Inam a complete WRECK now that I saw he had read my msg! I logged out quickly to nlt have to read any potentially disappointing reply… oh god I am such a mess! I don’t know that I can face reading his reply… if it is ‘bad news’…lol what the hell is wrong with me.. the truth is, I’d rather not read his reply for a while, and live in the illusion thst he might have written something wonderful like he misses me and can not wait to see me.
I am trembling here and have to keep my hands busy or they shake… perhaps I better just forget the whole thing!!! 😟😨 lol!!
That was truly beautiful Deb, really was… wow! 😉 M.
Oh I’m glad you liked it M. It’s the way it is. 😊
Yep. It’s a beauty. Put it in your book!
Thank you so much JoAnna!