Haiku No. 462: Reveal

Posted on March 28, 2019 by learning to live like water

Dawn

Darkness becomes dawn
From formlessness, day is born
Shadows are revealed

By Deborah E. Dayen

PIcture from Pinterest

7 responses to “Haiku No. 462: Reveal”

thelonelyauthorblog says:

March 28, 2019 at 8:00 am

Im love this little thing. The second line really resonated with me.
Beautifully penned

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- learning to live like water says:
  
  March 28, 2019 at 8:28 am
  
  I’m so happy you like it! I was just sitting in the dark, watching as the dawn came. It’s one of my favorite times of day, though I rarely see it, lol.
  
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  - thelonelyauthorblog says:
    
    March 28, 2019 at 8:37 am
    
    well, that was the perfect inspiration for this Haiku.
    have a good one.
    
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    - learning to live like water says:
      
      March 28, 2019 at 9:55 am
      
      You too!
      
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      - thelonelyauthorblog says:
        
        March 28, 2019 at 9:55 am
        
        Thanks
        
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JoAnna says:

March 31, 2019 at 9:46 pm

It’s comforting to know dawn always comes. Beautiful message and photo!

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- learning to live like water says:
  
  March 31, 2019 at 11:27 pm
  
  Thanks, JoAnna. I had a hard time finding the right pic cuz I wanted black and white, and shadows… so I’m glad you like it!!
  
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