Haiku No. 433: Which? Posted on July 4, 2018 by learning to live like water Your gaze meets my eyes It tells me what’s on your mind Desire or disdain? By Deborah E. Dayen Picture from Pinterest Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
I love this, Deb! Did you mean for the first line to have 4 syllables? I
Ummmmm. No. 😳. Thank you for catching that!!! Glad you liked it. 😊
No worries. It reads fine the way it is. Just asking because some people to tweak the syllables a bit. It’s definitely worth the read. But your haiku always are. Happy 4th!
Thanks trE! Hope yours has been good. We’re heading to the fireworks shortly!
You’re most welcome! Enjoy! I live about 5 minutes away (driving) from Downtown. I’ll hear them when they set them off. See them too. Make plenty of memories. 😊