5 responses to “Haiku No. 433: Which?”

1. I love this, Deb! Did you mean for the first line to have 4 syllables? I

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   • Ummmmm. No. 😳. Thank you for catching that!!! Glad you liked it. 😊

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     • No worries. It reads fine the way it is. Just asking because some people to tweak the syllables a bit. It’s definitely worth the read. But your haiku always are. Happy 4th!

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       • Thanks trE! Hope yours has been good. We’re heading to the fireworks shortly!

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         • You’re most welcome! Enjoy! I live about 5 minutes away (driving) from Downtown. I’ll hear them when they set them off. See them too. Make plenty of memories. 😊

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