Haiku No. 164: Living in the Flow

gliding in the moonlight

Gliding in moonlight
Floating with sun in my eyes
Pliable, content.

Riding on ebb tide
Let the water carry me
Trust it knows its way.

Old pain receding
Water soothing my tired soul
Renewing my joy

By Deborah E. Dayen

Picture from Google Images

9 responses to “Haiku No. 164: Living in the Flow

  1. That was lovely, and water like flowing…
    There were 6 in the first line. Also I took the liberty of removing in my head a lot of ‘the’ from yours and one word change to make the count. To me ‘thes’ seemed to spoil your wonderful imagery and atmospheric watery flow..

    anyway for you to see.

    Gliding in moonlight
    Floating with sun in my eyes
    Pliable, content

    Riding on the tide
    Let water carry me far
    Trust it knows its way

    Old pain receding
    Water soothes my aching soul
    Renewing my joy

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